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Gwe. IV

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

You certainly have a way with women. This image was done pretty well. The high key nature of the soft light across her entire body both beautifies and slims her figure. While simultaneously adding soft subtle deffinition to her stomach area. Her black clothing adds contrast to the overall image while the see through lingerie ties the extremes together.

But I think there is some room for improvement here. I love her left hand near her ear. That arm is good. The right is alright but you cut off her finger tips and that leads my eyes out of the image. The positioning of the arm could possibly be move away from the body to make it more dynamic. Then the right arm wouldn't break the silluette of her lower body because, let's face it, this girl has some nice curves. The only other thing I noticed that I would work on is the small grey shape to the right of her hip. It could be me but I find it a little distracting but that's an easy fix.

Overal this is a very well done classy tasteful image of this young woman. Everything I have written here about any sort of improvements are all very minor nitpicks. You did a great job!