I love your composition, using the model as the horizontal line in the image and not the back ground. The lighting is warm and soft and very pleasing. Only negative for me is the bottom right where a bit of the model's leg is in frame - this serves to draw the eye away. The image might benefit from a slightly tighter crop to remove that or even clone it away. There is enough negative space at the top of the image for you to be able to crop and keep the image in the same proportions as it currently is. I did it myself and it works
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