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Her direct stare at the camera is appealing, hightlighting her eyes and facial features. Also appealing is the straight position of her head, causing her hair to fall naturally around her shoulders.
Lighting is excellent, although the shadow on her face is a slight distraction. The colors of her garment contrast nicely with the simple whiteness of the bed.
Originality is hard to measure, as this type of posture has been used before. However, this doesn't detract anything from the portrait's appearance.
In summary, an excellent work giving justice to an attractive woman.
Here is my critique, or rather, point of view.
Vision: The pose is... perfect. I wouldn't change a thing, great job instructing your model and capturing the moment. Well chosen colors and makeup. Two small things about the composition - curve of the "thing" she's lying on is touching the frame and her left arm's fingers are cut off. Nothing too distracting, but I guess you could have avoided this easily. 4.5/5
Originality 3/5. This can't be taken as negative, because this image is supposed to have other qualities than originality.
Technique 5/5. Very well lit, shot and processed. Colors are lovely, focus spot on.
Impact 5/5 The image is just beautiful and that is what I beleve you wanted to capture. No distracting elements, just pure loveliness
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