Well as no one else has written a comment, I think I will get the ball-rolling. I think its a beautiful pic, with the focus on the actual model who is a beaut (remember I no photographer). Its soft and warm. the only thing I think that could have added to the picture is if the model had been looking straght at you. I mean that she should not have been looking down but out - at us looking in - so to speak. Catch our eye and not let go. Do I make sence?