I really enjoy this shot. She has a natural look and expression. I see no evidence of over retouching which is different. I think it would of been more powerful without the view of the butt area, it would leave more mystery to the story. The lighting is spot on and the color tone is perfect. I wish here eyes were engaging the viewer because the way it is now my eyes are drawn more to her rear than her face. Very natural glamor shot and my commendations on a job well done. Please check out my work, I would love your opinion.
The lighting and pose is great. depth of field good. my eyes do wander to her butt quite a bit since she has a nice one but I like it when different parts of a picture draw my eyes from one place to the next like a guided tour. I have never noticed (a lot of things I don't notice) anyone hold their lip with their fingers like that unless they were trying to get out a lip piercing so it does make me wonder if she is starting to take one out or if there is something else going on there. Her expression is very sweet and I can't help but wonder what she is looking at over there out of our view. I could be misreading it but it's like she is watching something funny and is one breath away from bursting out into laughter.
Amazing completion of: lovely skin tone, natural(colors) of makeup, Tones of background, model's top and linen of bed. Model's position/pose, Angle of capture and finally the beauty/attractiveness/sex-appeal of the subject.