I try when asked to write a critique fairly and it is only my opinion.The photo that you have asked critique on is beautiful.The model looks relaxed and has a lovely pose. The mood of the photo is relaxed but also as a slight erotic feel about it,she has the look of someone who feels satisfied,,,, My view is that the angle of the photo taken is not right,I feel a little disorientated when looking at her for a short time. I very much like the way you have hinted with the placement of the lace But its still a gorges photo of a nude women,well done
I find the photo, the model, and the technique of this photograph is excellent. The composition and the lighting are superbly done. The models pose is quite pleasing. The completely white background with the contrasting beautiful skin tones of the model create a very good impact on the viewer.
If I were going to change anything it would be the pillow that is used in this and one other photo in the series. To me, the pillow is a distraction - I'm not sure why, but I believe it is because the shape and positioning of it seems to disrupt the flow of the model's image.
It is a gorgeous image, however, and the pillow doesn't ruin the viewing experience at all for me.