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Submitted: April 3, 2012
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Critique by ~Jeribai Apr 4, 2012, 3:01:56 PM

Overall, I love the image. I think Chrismday's critique also has much merit as far as minor ways to make it even stronger. The only true issue I can find aside from that is a problem with the small details. I don't know if it's a compression issue, file type, or whatnot. The individual strands of hair, eyelashes, iris, and lips feel unusually crisp. Considering how soft the rest of the image is I feel it takes something away from the overall impact. Also, a very minor thing, but the hair on top of her head almost looks crimped, as opposed to the flowing curves of the rest, so removing that would also give it that slight improvement.

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Critique by *chrismday Apr 3, 2012, 10:18:05 AM

This is a lovely image, all the things you want to capture for a model are gracefully frozen in time. This is a very standard boudoir shot from the framing and lighting aspects. I do like how you have included her butt into the frame, most are shot with a sheet covering for a lower angle to hide it.

Her right hand looks a bit awkward to me, maybe try having it caressing the right side of her head so that side of the frame doesn't look so busy. I would have loved it the wall was blown out so the bed has a seamless appearance. Also if her eyes were on the lens.

Very nice image regardless! Keep up the good work.

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!lightsong-arts Mar 24, 2013 Professional Photographer

Aside from the hair issues mentioned below, this is a lovely, innocent, sensual image.

~irishgood Nov 16, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

OHH, BEST WORKS.. SO LOVELY & SEXY..

~veeru2 Nov 6, 2012

very nice.

!deadrisingx1 Oct 5, 2012

Flawless!

~live-life Sep 25, 2012

I am not a photographer or an artist - even if I try hard I can't find most of the details as some people mention here still I appreciate beauty and the way its been presented. I am not sure from where u find models but most of them are a delight and on top of that the way you have presented them is really heart stopping. Kudos for creating a memorable journey .